你校正在开展以"感恩"为主题的征文活动，你有许多值得感恩的人，如父母、老师、同学⋯⋯他们或帮助过你，或影响到你，你最想感谢谁？请根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，用于投稿。
要点提示：
（1）他/她有什么特点（外貌、性格……） ？
（2）他/她对你影响最深的事是什么？
（3）你想怎样感谢他/她？
写作要求：
（1）文中须包含三个方面的内容要点，根据要点提示可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；
（2）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）：
（3）文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名，地名，校名等内容。
参考词汇 care about 关心……unforgettable 难以忘怀的
In my life，many people helped and influenced（影响） me a lot.The person I want to say my thanks most is ________
【答案】 In my life，many people helped and influenced（影响） me a lot.The person I want to say my thanks most is my English teacher，Mr Bob.I am writing to express my sincere thanks to him because he has helped me a lot in the past three years.
I still remember that he devoted his spare time to helping me with my English.I wasn't good at English when I entered this school.Thus，I was so worried about it that I often cried silently after class.It was he who comforted me a lot and promised to help me improve it.I was advised to read aloud in the morning and speak as much as possible in class.Because of his useful advice and my hard work，I have made great progress in English in the past three years.Last year，I came first in the final English exam and both of us were very excited!
I will never forget him though I will leave him soon.I really hope one day I will become an excellent English teacher like him so that I will help more children like me fall in love with English!
I still remember that he devoted his spare time to helping me with my English.I wasn't good at English when I entered this school.Thus，I was so worried about it that I often cried silently after class.It was he who comforted me a lot and promised to help me improve it.I was advised to read aloud in the morning and speak as much as possible in class.Because of his useful advice and my hard work，I have made great progress in English in the past three years.Last year，I came first in the final English exam and both of us were very excited!
I will never forget him though I will leave him soon.I really hope one day I will become an excellent English teacher like him so that I will help more children like me fall in love with English!
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