假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每
句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I have planned an autumn outing for my class next week，and I'm writing to ask your permission．
First，the place where we've decided to visit-the Forest Park is not far away from the city．We can take a bus and ride a bike to get there．Second，the trip would provide us with a great opportunity to get close to the nature．Third，we need to spare some time to take some physical exercises．Some teachers as well as Mr Wang is going to join us to make sure of our safe．
We are all looking forward to receive your permission．We will appreciate you if you can kindly give us an
immediate reply．
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