简洁的语言传递巨大的能量。当你失意低落时，有一句话激励你前行。请以"The words that raised me up"为题，根据以下思维导图中的要点，用英语写一篇短文，讲述"Hard work is half of success."激励你的经历。内容提示：

The words that raised me up	Warm words：magic power
	Experience：how to swim，sad，comfort，give me the courage.
	Feelings：

注意：
   （1）短文必须包含思维导图中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；
   （2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
   （3）词数80- 100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。

The words that raised me up__________________

【考点】记叙文；日常生活．

【答案】The words that raised me up   Warm words always have magic power to make us confident and full of hope.I like "Hard work is half of success." very much.
        I still remember the first time I learned how to swim.At first the coach taught me some basic swimming skills.Though I practiced hard，I still couldn't make any progress.I felt sad and doubted that I was born without the ability to swim.The coach seemed to know something from the sadness on my face.He comforted me and said， "Hard work is half of success.I believe you will make it." Suddenly I felt full of energy again.These words gave me the courage to keep on swimming.Finally，I learned to swim and did the best!
     Thanks to these words，I challenged myself and became a better man.