改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断，如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下面要求改正：
    此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
    此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
    此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，并在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
    注意：原行没有错误的不要改。每行最多只能加、减、改动一个词，缩写算一个词。
Two men are in the same room of a hospital.They are serious ill.One （1）

seriously

seriously

man has to lie on his bed all the day.Every day，the man by the window （2）

the

the

tells the other about things outside. "Some children are thrown （3）

throwing

throwing

bread to the ducks on the lake." "The girls are such beautiful in their （4）

so

so

dresses." The other man is happy to hear about all the activity （5）

activities

activities

and colors of the world outside.One day，the man by the window dies. （6）

√

√

The others man asks the nurse to move his bed next to the window. （7）

other

other

Finally he can sit up to see outside，and he is very disappointed （失望） . （8）

but

but

"My roommate told me so much wonderful things about outside!But （9）

many

many

all I can see is a white wall!" he says. "He couldn't see the wall.He
was blind.He just wanted you live with hope." says the nurse. （10）

to live

to live