假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
A tourist bus wandered its way into a mountain area． On the way， two passengers - a couple of young lovers - were very attracted by the beautiful scenery that they called on a stop to get off the bus． They were left behind and the bus went on． Suddenly， they heard a loud boom ahead of the road． There was a huge rock rolled down a hill that hit the bus and fell with it into a deep valley． The lovers were greatly shocked by the news that no passengers on board were survived． When they calmed down they sighed and expressed their feelings in a few words．
The above story was told by a women guide when we were riding a tourist bus to scenic mountain． She asked us to guess that the lovers said immediately after the disaster that they had narrow escaped．
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