My husband received a letter a month ago from a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school.She was writing because she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life.
In the letter she wrote, "You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math.Before you came to teach us,I had been terribly poor at math,and had never thought that would be interested in it.To my surprise,you magically showed me the beauty of math;I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it.Gradually my interest in it began to grow.Thanks to your encouragement,I made continuous progress in math;and finally made up my mind to study it in the university.Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California.You played an important part.Thank you!"
What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher!My husband has received many letters from students over the years.This one was special,for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health.
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1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法,内容包括:
(1)上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师;
(2)举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响;
(3)你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。
[写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【考点】主题式.
【答案】A thank-you letter from an former student of the writer's husband meant a lot to the retired old man.From the letter,the writer learnt how great influence a teacher might have over his students.
The encouragement from a teacher is really of great significance to his/her student,especially when the student has trouble with study.Timely encouragement can raise his confidence and inspire his motivation to work hard.
When I was in middle school,I had some difficulty in learning English.I couldn't remember the new words,so I always did poorly in the English exams.For some time I even decided to give up learning English.However,everything changed when I met Mrs.Jones,my new English teacher.She encouraged me to try some different methods to remember English words,and when I made a little progress,she always praised me,so I worked harder than ever.Gradually I became interested in remembering new words and began to catch up with the other students in my class.At the end of the term I got the highest mark in English.
Now I owe all my progress in English to Mrs.Jones whose encouragement has made me achieve what I have now.Here I want to send my sincere thanks heart to her.
The encouragement from a teacher is really of great significance to his/her student,especially when the student has trouble with study.Timely encouragement can raise his confidence and inspire his motivation to work hard.
When I was in middle school,I had some difficulty in learning English.I couldn't remember the new words,so I always did poorly in the English exams.For some time I even decided to give up learning English.However,everything changed when I met Mrs.Jones,my new English teacher.She encouraged me to try some different methods to remember English words,and when I made a little progress,she always praised me,so I worked harder than ever.Gradually I became interested in remembering new words and began to catch up with the other students in my class.At the end of the term I got the highest mark in English.
Now I owe all my progress in English to Mrs.Jones whose encouragement has made me achieve what I have now.Here I want to send my sincere thanks heart to her.
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