为了庆祝建党一百周年，5月17日，初一年级的同学们来到了毛泽东的故乡—韶山，请你根据以下提示，写一则短文，记录你的这次经历。内容包括：当天天气、乘坐的交通工具、参与的活动如：唱红歌，朗诵毛泽东诗词……（请适当补充 其他活动），以及个人感受。
要求：（1）文中不得出现真实的学校和姓名。
（2）包含必要的信息点，适当补充。
（3）字数 80词左右 （字数太少或超太多，酌情扣分）。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（4）参考词汇：sing revolutionary songs 唱红歌，read Mao Zedong 's poems aloud 朗诵毛泽东诗词
A Trip to Remember We went on a school trip to Shaoshan on May I7th.It was really unforgettable（难忘的）!___________
【答案】A Trip to Remember
We went on a school trip to Shaoshan on May I7th.It was really unforgettable!The weather was sunny.We visited Mao Zedong 's hometown by bus.It took two hours to get there，so we had to sing revolutionary red songs on the journey，and the school also made us read Mao Zedong 's poems aloud ，to our delight，our class red best and won the first place.Our history teacher also told stories about Mao Zedong while visiting，who has made great contributions to our country.The event strengthened our patriotism and love for the Party，which also made us learn more about the Communist Party of China.
We went on a school trip to Shaoshan on May I7th.It was really unforgettable!The weather was sunny.We visited Mao Zedong 's hometown by bus.It took two hours to get there，so we had to sing revolutionary red songs on the journey，and the school also made us read Mao Zedong 's poems aloud ，to our delight，our class red best and won the first place.Our history teacher also told stories about Mao Zedong while visiting，who has made great contributions to our country.The event strengthened our patriotism and love for the Party，which also made us learn more about the Communist Party of China.
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