假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Measuring at 8.0 Ms，a terrible earthquake strikes Wenchuan on May 12，2008．A great number of houses and buildings was destroyed，left as many as 10，000，000 people homeless．That shocked us was that almost everything was in ruins．Fortunate，the government took steps immediately．Now after a decade，with people who come from all fields giving a helpful hand，a new city appears in the front of us but it looks like a beautiful garden．In my opinion，without the support of our motherland，the survivor could not lead such a comfort life as it is now．I am proud that I live so great a country．
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